All Comments on 'A Twist of Fate Ch. 01'

It is woman singular not women plural plus many other stupid mistakes.

This is a twisted writer!

First: either you stole this story, outright, from the original author, OR you ARE the original author (unlikely) and are reposting your own story, OR you "based" (meaning, you copied it, but changed a few details) your story on one which was written by someone else, and convinced yourself it's not plagiarism--it's an homage!

Second: "to", "too" and "two". Learn when to use them. I don't think you got it right once in this story.

bad spelling made it unreadable

How did this trash ever get published? The writer can't spell, has no idea about grammar, doesn't know the difference between woman and women and the theme is not erotic , just sick. Please go somewhere else!!

Grammar errors yes you have some, plot of story decent like to read more not everyone is a hater of of the dominate lifestyle.

Did Lynn ever regain her composer? What kind of music was written?

First page was so bad with grammar and spelling, that I couldn't finish. Maybe an editor would help your work be more readable, I think your story line was a good one.

Apart from the painful grammatical errors, the story was good. It developed slowly, building some character depth and reader anticipation. How he would take his mother would be interesting.

Nasty story this isn't love it's rape!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Fucked up piece of shit story.