All Comments on 'A Twisted Tale'

Not bad. Could see it coming, but a nice twist at the end just the same.

great story with a nice twist. I wonder how he felt about sharing his wife now.... He went but would not cheat or her but she had no problem cheating on him did she ... great story line

Doesn't know his own wife. Can guys get any more stupid in these stories? Jeez.

FIRE THE EDITOR.

... let some of the heat out of this story. But it was still hot enough it had heat to spare. Good work. What did they do after they found out they both loved group sex?

You gave away the wife's identity to the reader when 1. wife suggests cabin, knowing Mike the swinger would be there, and of course when 2. hubby recognizses her, but does not, even though she SPOKE, because she was wearing a mask and had shaved? Very Shakespearean! Good idea though. Thanks

One page quicky.

I loved your story, but like most of the other comments, I have to agree that it was predictable. I still give it a 100% because other than the predictability, it was hot and well written. I hope that you write another story soon, just a little less predictable.

Guess the boy must have been blinded by all the strange ass not to have seen that one coming. I liked it anyway,top marks for nasty factor. But next time make the plot a little less obvious. Looking forward to the next one.

I will agree that the story is predictable and common, but it was great! I loved it! I wish I would go to a party like this and find my wife there. Thanks! Please write more!

gangbanged by a 130 guys, sexy....NOT, just another stupid cuckold wanna be. Slut and stupid husband. There seems to be alot of that here.

According to your story, she/they were not into swinging. Once a year she goes away for training and he stays home.

No one seems to have got this. One of two things happened.

1) she had no idea he was there and when she showed him her surprise - well, it wasn't that they could now agree to be swingers - she was outright, blatantly cheating - a slut.

2) she had decided to have Mike talk him into going in hopes that would get them into a conversation. Mike and Melissa knew all along, maybe?

Point, she was into it without him knowing, even as swingers...bye, bye marriage!

Anyway, a story, pretty good!

Thanks.

A great day for LW when this poor chump stopped posting his garbage.