All Comments on 'A Twisted Wedding Night'

by FrostShard

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mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 9 years ago
Twisted indeed!

Hope to see how this plays out! Of course he cleans her up after with his tongue, maybe she consummates their marriage by fucking him with a strap on after, leaving him caged until the honeymoon!?? Nice dirty start!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Did she add pox riddled to the requirements for this stud? I can understand why cucky wouldn't really want to come near her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Please continue soon.

Don't be put off by the usual comments from men who are horribly insecure in their sexuality. I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Corny story...

What is never explained is the real need for the guy to be abused and the woman

to be so willing to be the other half of the action. Is this really the way that a fraction of the adult population have found sexual satisfaction to be ?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A Perfect Wife

MMMmmm,I'd love to have a wife like her!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

It was a great story for the category.

I never understand the strange, angry comments on these kind of stories. Why are they reading it in the first place if they don't like the category it's in?

They should stick to their vanilla.

caendellcaendellalmost 8 years ago
Really good so far.

I hope you continue this story. Detailing the whole of the honeymoon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I am disapointed

A good story line but a few ideas

He should have been made to have been in his tux, kneeling before the strange man holding the mans cock and asking the man to do the wedding honors. He should have kissed the cock and then kissed the pussy and had to presented the cock to the pussy and say pussy that I will never fuck please enjoy this man cock that I do not have. Then he should have knelt there and watched and did their bidding. cleaning them as needed refreshing them and bringing them refreshments. serving his bride and her cock for the night. He should have been ther to thank the Man for fulfilling the duties that he could not do for himself. 4yourpleasureiam

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

she is a whore run get out

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Keep stroking mr frostshard

Maybe you can persuade your own bride to do this for you on your wedding night??

Wouldn't that be lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Epic stupidity

Of course expecting her to change was ridiculous in the first place. But when she refuses sex on their wedding night any sane man shows up the next day to start the annulment. And lets face facts. She's not dragging him anywhere. Regardless of how he's dressed all he needs to do is stand up and bitch slap her. What's she going to do? Beat him up? I don't think so. Poorly thought out drivel.

No stars

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

The real reason they married... She does love him because of his personality. submissive. easily controllable and allows her to be the dominate part of their relationship. He never tell her no or attempts to control her. Not a Controlling alpha male and she uses dildo's on his sissy ass and he loves it... and despite what she says about denying him sex. she talks the talk but doesn't walk the walk. She does allow him to have sex...sloppy seconds and that's what drives his ego.

MisterteaMisterteaover 3 years ago
Nice idea, badly written

Early on, the plan is for him to be "chained to the side of the bed". Later on he's to spend the night in the closet.

It's best to read the story over, from beginning to end, before posting, to pick up these issues.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A lot of this story resembles the comic Honeymoon Cuckold by Devin Dickie. Not sure which of these came first.

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