All Comments on 'A Vacation for Mom'

by blackrandl1958

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ansdguyansdguyover 5 years ago
This story was fantatic the firsty time around...

And just as fantastic the second. Thank you for reposting it.

MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedover 5 years ago
* * * * *

Loved it the first time, Still love it the

second read through.

Thanks for bringing is back.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Great read man

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57over 5 years ago

I remember the story from before and it's still as hot and sexy as the first time I read it! Five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fine Wine

Like fine wine your story only gets better with time! *****

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 5 years ago
Great love story

I loved the long slow build up to an amazing crescendo when they started ducking. 5*s

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 5 years ago
Excellent!

I'm not usually an incest fan, and honestly wouldn't want a steady diet of them, but this was simply hot.

I foresaw her going back to her maiden name.

I admit to what I think is a common male prejudice, of finding mother/son hot and father/daughter creepy.

arrowglassarrowglassover 5 years ago
Such a passionate read!

A pleasure to peruse...thanks!

GirlintheMoonGirlintheMoonover 5 years ago
Hot and so well-written!

Thank you for reposting it! I loved it.

tallman441tallman441over 5 years ago
Excellent!

Excellent story. Very hot. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good

I remember this story. I read the first couple of weeks when i found this site a few years ago. Thanks for reuploading I was trying to find it many times lol

DunkirkDunkirkover 5 years ago
Review

Excellent. You need to fo as sequel where mom gets pregnant

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Moms vacation

Hot story, well written

Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
As good as I remembered...

I recalled reading this story years ago, the moment I saw the title and the author's name in the story-list, and had to read it again. It was every bit as good as I remembered it being, the first time around. Gave it 5 stars, back then, and 5 stars this time around!

bunny4medbunny4medover 5 years ago

I remember this story from before. Loved reading it again.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 5 years ago
Great descriptions

Loved descriptions of bodies and touching. Such a beautiful story of uninhibited love that all mothers and sons should experience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Randi Retrospective

Hi,

It's lovely to see all these old chestnuts reappearing. It just confirms that you have been adept at creating believable characters since your early days. The subject matter here is not my favorite, but it just keeps flowing along and won't be put down.

Now, while it is fun to journey down memory lane I hope this isn't a distraction from creating new works and ambling down new paths. I really hope to see more originals from The Amazing Randi soon....

Ell

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent small story

I believe that you, the author, are quite the romanticist. You have given a story, one that I have not read before, that depicts all the signs of 2 people falling hopelessly and forever in love. The full on descriptions of body and emotion, the care, the love, and desire, were all covered incredulously well. Excellent small story. Only saw one typo unlike many l have seen in many other stories I have read. Had me riveted until the end leaving me feeling quite horny as this site, Erotica.com, quite commonly is all about. Thank you.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 5 years ago
Good

You write really well, stories are good.

But you could do with a little editing. For instance we had no idea who the POV character was for a while. Until an erection was produced did not even know it was male. Little editing like this can make a huge difference.

Don't tell me the name Regan made it male as I am reading another story where a female character is named Reagan. At least there we were told it was a female before the name was given.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very good

I think you did the hardest trick of all in incest stories in that you made us at least accept that this is indeed a mother and son and not just a disguised older woman/younger man romance. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
More!!!!

We need more to this story! Detailed description of their trip or their wedding night, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Out standing

Of all i have read here your story was incredible...did not read the beginning but if this is true .............Love you both and hope your together to this day.

Richard

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

this story had me hard write a second chapter please as the rest of your stories that i have read i did read vagabonds too and that story was great by the way i am the one from pontiac that gave you a good rating on that story 5 stars on all the stories in here

jneric2691jneric2691over 5 years ago
I Love This Story!

Lately, I read so many stories that have ripped my heart out. Some author that are my favorites have credited you in their stories so I actively came looking for you. I glad that this story was my first. This story was so beautiful. I look forward to reading more of you work.

Thank You

jneric2691

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very well done

You've managed to successfully navigate a socially very sensitive topic. And mother/son incest is probably the most difficult to present in any kind of sensitive, evocative manner. Most frequently, such a topic is presented in a rather crude way that would more easily describe sub-human behavior.

I'd like to see a version that probed and developed the non-physical, non-sexual features of this relationship. You opened that door by a passing reference to the extraordinary capabilities of intellect that both characters share. Also, you left undeveloped the ending reference to the mom figuring out a strategy to secure their extended relationship. That omission made the end seem quite rushed.

Just a few thoughts.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very well done.

A beautiful, tender and loving story and sexy as hell. Even better, a mother/son story. And I greatly appreciate the descriptions of mom. Long hair gets me every time. And the emotions made It real. It was kind of rushed at the end and ending abruptly. Hopefully you will write more about these 2 in the near future. Maybe something about their honeymoon? 5*. -dave

GmanicGmanicover 5 years ago
I love this ...

I am rock hard now having read two of your stories!

DogFuzzDogFuzzover 5 years ago
Yes

While my interests do not lie in the incest area I have to comment that your story was extremely well written. You find a way to make the characters emotions leap off the written page into the reader’s mind. I applaud you! Thank you for sharing your talents. 5* of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
The most realistic and sensitive story ever written

I love how sensitive this was written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very good 5 star story

The only thing lacking is a bit younger and babies, for me at least...

Omart57Omart57over 5 years ago
You write-

the best love stories! Another great one blackrandl1958!!!

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
Good story.

I loved it. Good job. Kudos to your editor(s)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
...very erotic...

...and thank christ no babies...sick of most authors' obsession with procreation. I'd love for these two to work it into anal...thanks!

roveroneroveroneover 4 years ago
LOVED it!

Very very hot...!!

Loved the characters, dialogue, smoking hot coupling...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Last memory

Mitukümmend aastat tagasi kükitas ema mulle suu peale ja ma imesin ta kliitorit.

linnearlinnearabout 4 years ago
Nicely Written

I really enjoyed that, very hot and a very good ending.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77over 3 years ago

Very sweet and hot! 5 stars!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good Story

Held my interest and was good read.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Smoking hot and you made it flow that I could see myself doing the same thing they did. I would like to see a part 2 if you ever come back around to it... 5*

JamokieJamokieover 3 years ago
Excellent

What a great story and supper hot action. This could easily be expanded with the same characters.

Justmenow178Justmenow178over 3 years ago
This is how to picture paradise

I didn't have to re-read even one sentence like in some other stories. You never got ahead of yourself or the story.

That little bit of words says what a great read. Need, want more

Ron

MRdotEdot2RMRdotEdot2Rabout 3 years ago

It was a really enjoyable read... but extremely long paragraphs. I gave it five stars and six would fit it too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Wow, my favorite author has been decided!

TSreaderTSreaderabout 3 years ago

A wonderful love story! It would be great to see more of it and where they wind up together. Thank you!

SlipperySaddleBumSlipperySaddleBumabout 3 years ago

One of the first stories I ever read on one of these sites. It's a great one. I just copied and pasted the link and forwarded it to some new acquaintances. Doesn't seem like it but I've been writing for 19 years, now. I have one hell of a collection of stories in different stages of completion that I dabble with, from time to time. I lost the 'fire' when they started dictating what writers were allowed to let their readers read and what their readers were allowed to read. The fuckers are stealing our freedoms on every front while gutless fools sit back and allow their rights to be cancelled. President Reagan had it right when he said, "Freedom is only one generation away from extinction". Thank the Teacher's Unions and the flock of stupid fucks who watched them 'dumb down' their kids and did nothing to stop it. Now those dumbed down kids have grown up and are destroying buildings and statues that represent nothing to them..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Out fucking-standing!

mikeyjb51mikeyjb51almost 3 years ago

AWESOME, simply AWESOME

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Another terrific story!....and it ended as it should, with them together and getting married.

Burcham8Burcham8almost 3 years ago

Hawt, hawt, hawt…!!! Wow!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nice love story also. I think close relatives can love each other one another outside of loving each other as mother and son or brother and sister. I don't think its all that common but absolutely a brother can love his sister because she is his sister but that same brother can love his sister the way a man loves a woman. I did with my sister. And this logic help me begin a 25 year relationship with my sister. She knew that I would always love her as a brother loves his sister but she also knew that the man in me loved her as the beautiful woman whom she was.

I was 16 years at the time and Jo Jo was 18 years old. We grew up in a Hispanic household. Our father died of cancer when I was 10 years old so it was just Jo Jo and myself and mom. Mom kept an eagle on Jo Jo. Her daughter was not getting pregnant by some stupid ass high boy. Where I had more freedom and was very sexually active. But my affairs mean nothing to me. It was just sex. But Jo Jo...that was another matter. I wanted her in a bad way and I had a plan to help me introduce her to sex. You see I felt in my heart that Jo Jo was still a virgin and that at 18 she has to have some curiosity of sex and who better to trust and introduce her to sex other than her own brother.

I might write a story about how I was spot on about my thoughts and how I was the first one to taste Jo Jo sweet pussy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oma ema on imeline keppida.Mul on meeles see kui ta hakkas alt ülese tõukama ja ta vitt lirtsus nii meeletult.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Hi Randi. BJ again.

As spectacular as ever ... after my third reading (and there will be more readings ... obviously). And thanks for giving this story its proper ending.

BJ

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I read the story twice; it is a very well written story. I did us my fingers twice while reading it. I am an Indian housewife, 37 years, Hindu, 5'5" with 36-29-38 figure quite good looks, and mother of the lone child, a son, 17 years. Though it is taboo, but I have been secretly watching my well endowed son for quite a few months. I feel embarrassed in admitting that I am over sexed, who started before attaining puberty. Two years before I started trying to seduce one of my son's dark muscular friend from another religion. Incidentally, I am very fair in complexion, my husband too has kinda fair complexion, but our son is darker than just dusky; a regular at gym for last three years, he has developed a good muscular body. i got intimate woth my son's friend; and on one such occasion, when we had planned to spend one night in a hotel. After three drinks, I was quite tipsy; the young boy had consumed more than four pegs. I don't remember the topic we were talking about, while him drilling me deeper, he happened to mention my son and his tool, he had seen after coming out of the pool. I did not believe him when he said my son was huge; realy huge, with more than 9 inches in length. Since them I am dying to ride my son at the earliest, but our society would never permit it. I am not sure, how to gget my son in bed.- Anupama Joshi (India)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

That the best story that I have ever read and I just wish it would continue with a little series of these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This is quite possibly the sexiest story I’ve seen on this site. No small achievement!

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alo0ozalo0ozabout 2 years ago

Great incest love story. The type of story hard to find in literotica. Most of them are trashy fuck story w/o any romance whatsoever.

I really loved this story very much. keep the good things coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Damn, what an amazing story. I'm new to your work and after 4 stories which got 5 star's, I think you are now my favorite author. I would love to read more about this couple, so a 2nd chapter would always be welcome. You now have another huge fan, keep up the great work. I'm just going to sit and read everything you got. Have an awesome day.

Mike

rodryder44rodryder44almost 2 years ago

All is well that ends well. Ignore the fact that you need a birth certificate to get a US passport

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fucking 😍 BEAUTIFUL

mattenwmattenwover 1 year ago

This is a hot incest story. Although it's not my genre, I think this story is well told. Can get carried away when you have such a gorgeous woman as a mother! 5*!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I just read some comments & some dude says you need s birth crrty to get a passport. Since they never left thre U. S. Why would to hey need a passport ?

Did you forget that Hawií? And American Samoa is also part of the U. S.

Great story. 5 🌟 🌟🌟🌟🌟

Bill S.

Storylover5Storylover5over 1 year ago

Enjoyed this very much !

momloversonmomloverson9 months ago

Hottest mom son story ever....5 star

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved this one, 5 stars

Mike

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

A good romantic m/s love story but the ending was too fast. It felt super rushed. Could have used another page to put in more details and then a bit about their new life. It was basically just a "and they lived happily ever after".

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

5 stars because I cannot give you 20!

One of the most beautiful stories I read in Literotica.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Lovely story, but the ending was a little unsatisfactory. Wanted to read more. Like their first anal. And could she get impregnated? I know of women giving birth at 48 years.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

See on hea kui saad rahulikult oma ema nikkuda.

willyk1212willyk12125 months ago

good story could have been a little longer some anal and getting her preggo would have been great

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

I've always really liked this story, third time reading it. But something occurred to me. Everyone is always so beautiful in these stories. I get that it's fantasy, and I guess that's what people fantasize about. But I wonder if there are any stories about average looking or less than average looking people. In those, the emotions and feelings would have to take primary place, instead of the constant descriptions of how great looking everybody is...

Tosh54Tosh54about 1 month ago

Absolutely one of the best Erotic stories I have seen for along time I was there with them at the waterfall and in the bed .please continue writing....

Nekomusume_DaisukiNekomusume_Daisuki3 days ago

As always, beautiful...

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