All Comments on 'A Vacation Story Ch. 02'

Just like the first one this was fun to read, from their mutual thoughts to insecurity about the ordeal and the future. While younger it seems that lil sis is prepared to do it takes to get her brother to fall for her and she isn't afraid to play dirty. Hopefully bro finds his balls and comes out clean to his sis, I really want to see them happily together in the long run.

5*

Yes, a nice build up between brother and sister - friendship, love and caring. His sister is hot for him and now he's shown her he feels the same way. Since she jerked him off and he masturbated her and felt her beautiful body; they both hopefully when their parents are away will make out hard and then have hard sex. This story is well written and has so much potential. Very arousing and full of love. Cannot wait for more chapters. Thank you.

Way too Short

The first two chapters have good build up, but it seems a bit rushed. Take your time. It is not a race. Take time for their feelings! That is what separates a good story from a great one!

Number of places where double verbs left the sentence needing to be reread to see which was better. That's your job not the readers, or an editor or proof reader. It would have been nicer to read a little more for the chapter. Like the hike down could be used to decide how each was handling the change in their relationship.

You have some bright future man.

Another fantastic chapter in this hot story! Keep up the good work!

More!!! Much better, but it has to conrunue, I want to know how much further it went, it was just getting started, gotta know if they get bolder or do they get caught, does he finally bang her lights out??? Continue it please

The build up is great; maybe a little rushed but still drawing in the reader. Keep the story going, they have two weeks and then college together possibly. This could turn into a good romance/incest tale; many possibilities available.

Great story. Please continue, maybe Mom catches them?