All Comments on 'A Very Discreet Whore Ch. 01'

by LC10

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Pleasant start to a fine series...

Very nice story and well thought out story. Flows well but not too fast. Now that you have started there are many directions you can go. Great start -- I look forward to more. I have a similar arrangement with a lady who cleans rental properties that I own here in Florida. (She had been a professional escort in years past.) It started slowly and now has progressed to where I have liaisons with both the cleaning lady (age 44) and her daughter (age 21). They have taught me so much and I am having the time of my life with no strings attached.

JPA51JPA51over 13 years ago
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You might think about changing "discrete" to"discreet". There's a difference.

guan818guan818over 12 years ago
Where is the first novella -

the perfect whore you mentioned in the first paragraph? I searched your profile and I can't find it. Would like the read it to learn more about the characters.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wonderful start!

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