All Comments on 'A Very Dominant Man'

All that buildup and no sex details? You write very well, but it was a huge disappointment to not have an actual sex scene to close the story. Maybe that was the intention, but whatever the case, the ending was a bit of a let-down.

I love your style. That was beautiful. I really liked the way you left all the details to the imagination, most of us as readers have dirty enough ones as it is. I'm ready for bed now.

It was a well written and sensual story. It left my imagination running wild. I also would have loved to see the story continue into a smooth close it was too abrupt.

I would love to see this continued. I think it has great potential for continuation.

Keep up on the good work.

As another comment said, this is well written, sensual and erotic.

One minor criticism: the ending is rather abrupt. About two or three more paragraphs carrying out the sensual motif to its conclusion would be an improvement.