All Comments on 'A Very Long Pause Pt. 01'

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blackkat46220blackkat46220almost 4 years ago

Sooo....? What's the conclusion? 😶

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Conclusion

Blackkat, as indicated in the title, this is Part 1.

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillalmost 4 years ago
Disappointment

Guess it truly is a long pause. If it doesn't get better, well......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
My 2 cents

I see this is your first story. Thanks for putting yourself out there. Not a bad start as I think your doing the background part before the build up. I like more dialogue and banter in stories. It gets me more involved with the story and characters. I think the story should be as important as the relationship between the mom and son. That's my opinion (my 2 cents). Thanks for your time and imagination.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
Masterfully crafted

It would surprise a lot of people to learn how many mother's admit to have watched their sons masturbate. Some try to defend by saying "accident" but if enough questions are asked they admit it was on purpose.

My mother later admitted, " I knew when you'd get hard, so one day I waited a couple of minutes, then made an excuse to open the bathroom door. "

BroadusBroadusalmost 4 years ago
waiting for more...

A well written and tantalizing story. With that beginning, I am waiting for more coffee.

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