All Comments on 'A Very Long Pause Pt. 02'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
"Coffee and More" very important words.

To a son in this situation it's very confusing. "Coffee and More" are reassuring words that let him know she is happy with the situation and wants it to progress.

Very well written.

Always taboo

KlitomaticKlitomaticalmost 4 years ago
Constructive critism

This is your story, write it the way you want, by the way it is pretty darn good so far. But, there is that word. Longer chapters might be more satisfying for a lot of us. Still good, keep making the effort.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
good start

Can't wait for the next episode. Sounds like a hot milf, especially sexy is some pussy hair sticking out of the panties. This has potential to be a hot story. Bring in some other fam members! The illustrated version would be nice!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Very original

Nicely build up the heat, a bit short for my liking.

So far amazing, keep up the tempo and longer chapter.

And please Don't bring sister in the plot, free for all or

family orgies ruin good story like your. Looking forward

to your next chapter. Thanks bud

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