All Comments on 'A Very Long Pause Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I hope to read more,

Damn you are good at writing. I really hope to read more from you. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Now it is time

Time to take your mom to bed and fuck the shit out of her. Have her legs up while you're pounding her pussy hard, or fuck her doggy style in the shower. Basically time for some serious mother fucking!

blackknight314blackknight314almost 4 years ago

I understand the buildup, but it is getting to be ho-hum.

Thanks for sharing though.

annistonannistonalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Blackknight314

I appreciate your comments and advice. Hopefully, Part 5, a longer part, will move a little quicker. Thanks again.

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
"Say' Yes, Mommy.' Call me mommy."

That and weenie shows she used restraint until his " coming of age" as my mother did. The father's Sunday morning skills are a great explanation of why a mother would seek attention from her son. Loved the touching with dad and sister present.

A woman born in the early 1930s was used to a long teasing courtship before going " all the way" as she was doing with her son. Absolutely a very well told story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
good

Your people are convincing. Even rarer, there are no grammar glitches to distract from the narrative.

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