All Comments on 'A Very Nice Present'

An unusal and interesting story. Excellent writing style. Hard to imagine this actually occcuring but enjoyed it very much. Write more.

i really enjoyed the slow build of this story.i wondered what could he have possibly asked of her,his cherished wife.i found myself slowing my reading,dreading as she did the coming event.my oh my,was i shocked when the night came and began to unfold.no wonder she ran away,wanting to be kept in the dark.by allowing this to happen,she willingly acknowledges her desire to be raped. what a gift she made of herself,to her husband.to be humiliated.having to endure the sexual use of her body's every orifice.for everyone to take their pleasures,repeated,at her expense. and to finally have orgasms shamelessly forced from her body. then at evening end,she lovingly asks her man for more of the same.would i? i'm unsure. this is an excellent fantasy,BH,for sure. will we see chapter 2? thanks.