Good story. I've read 2 so far, there is something "missing" for me, not quite sure what it is. Look forward reading more and maybe I'll have better critique.
4/24/24 UPDATE: Hello friends, it's been a few months. The first part of 2024 was a bit rough for me and my writing got paused for a while. However I am back up to speed in life and I hope to again be filling your computers or other reading devices with more outlandish and ver...