All Comments on 'A Very Private Beach Ch. 08'

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john-the-authorjohn-the-authoralmost 12 years ago
I liked the whole series

Smooth, nicely written, hot, believable. Thanks very much!

blackwatereagleblackwatereagleabout 10 years ago
I hope that....

the Eagle will see more of this story, so he can once again give it two talons up!

the Eagle

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
An enjoyable tale

And deserving of higher rates and more comments than it has.

Thanks.

orzeuorzeuover 8 years ago

Very nice story :) thank you :)

ohhfineohhfineover 8 years ago
outstanding

absolutely wonderful

BugwumpBugwumpover 7 years ago
Great fun!

A very warm and friendly story. I liked the inclusion of the Rangers in the final orgy. Well done, jehoram!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
A lovely old-fashioned......

........love story. Well written, well told. Thanks.

m222rjr.

crankyandtestycrankyandtestyabout 4 years ago
Good stuff!

Great writing, but was a bit disappointed that there was next to no MM or MMF or MMFF sex. Considering how free spirited the story line was, I was sorry that there was no guy on guy blowjobs or fucking! Maybe some new chapters?

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