by Egmont Grigor
I'm getting use to your New Zealand mannerism and style of writting..I enjoy reading your stories very much..
As I have said before another great story ,, Looking forward
to the next one..
always rely on Egmont to give you an interesting,humorous and usually bawdy story.Long may he continue to do so.
This guy is an absolute hoot. His stories are always full of great characters and the New Zealand language patterns are marvelous.
I could have handled several more pages of this quality. I loved the humour. My only (minor) problem was understanding why the delectable Greer would fall for Sebastian. While glad he was not portrayed as a 'hunk', I thought his character could have been a little stronger.
I enjoyed the read: the humor; the interaction between characters; and implication of a plot where there was none. I expect to publish a few short stories 'soon', though they need some editing for content. I further expect to utilize some of your ideas, though with my own flip on them.
Thank you for an enjoyable storyline.
The title spoke to me and the story charmed me :). Wonderful wit and humor. I'd love to have Greer's confidence and sophistication!
what a great tale. Loved the story, first thought it was going to be full of sex etc. but as it turned out it was the opposite and I was very pleasantly pleased. In fact I have added you and your profile to my bookmarks.