All Comments on 'A View of Alcatraz'

While one could understand the necessity of Groupsex quid pro quo, the conclusion was just sort of unfinished ending. OR WHETHER AN EXTENSION OF THE STORY IS TO BE ANTICIPATED? There is no indication at the end of page 2.

Very vivid description of the whole process and excellent use of emotion to bring out the protagonist. Also the inherent conflict involved in the evolution of multiple partner play from FFM to MMF was exceptionally well articulated. It is obvious you thought more of the evolution than Jed. Fool!! :)