All Comments on 'A Virtual Temptress Ch. 13'

While I enjoyed this new chapter it feels as though the story is jumping around a bit. I don't know that this plan they are executing was ever discussed prior to this.

What did they do to his friend that found her?

Just seems like we lack some information.

I like it but maybe a bit more in the sex scene department Not to be rude your writing is very good I just hope we get to see what the imps get up to

I suspect you have as many opinions as readers. I'm enjoying the opening up of the plot (they are a team! Planning a complex twisty heist! With hench imps! Whose payoff I cannot anticipate!), and the possibilities for even more arousing sex.

And I've ontological questions about the `game world', as William and perhaps Glorianna are clearly sentient, self aware; like Dan&Lexi; it's `real'; presumably the software is giving Dan access to another realm, just as real as Lexi's or Dan's, and Dan will need to be re-educated about the concept of `NPC' , which is perhaps just a synonym for 'indigineous people'.

(None of which need be addressed in your story, obv.)

Mostly just enjoying the arousing sexual dynamics involving Lexi, and anticpating how D&L will negotiate power, pleasure, partnership.

I check every day for the nxt chapter. Thank you for this great story.

Interesting, but I too am not entirely clear on what Dan and Lexi are planning. I don't know what Dan is hoping to accomplish by enslaving the Templars or bringing in more demons, even if they are lesser demons. I think some readers are disappointed they didn't get to read more of the Templars sleepy enslavement.

Someone mentioned that there seems to be information missing or that the story is jumping around. Hopefully it will become clearer as time goes on. It has been fun seeing how Lexi and Dan's relationship might be evolving.

Moar! Must have moar!!!

Love the JOI. Amazing chapter, keep it up!

Please continue my favorite story.

More?

So good! I've been following from chapter 1. Gotta have more!

I need more Lexi!

So eager for the next part!

I keep checking back every day in eager anticipation for the next chapter. Please keep up the amazing work!

Same here. Can't get enough. I crave more Lexi. More seduction. MORE!

I can't wait for the next part. Such a great story. I'm totally captivated.

I love this story. Sometimes I check multiple times a day to see if there's more.

Blasted through this series. I really hope you continue. It's definitely a new favorite.

Honestly, I might be just as addicted to Lexi as William is.

I love the seduction and how it’s building up to him actually planning something, but it seems like something was missed or skipped between the last chapter and this one

Amazing series!

Superb!!!