All Comments on 'A Visit To an Adult Store'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I've voted.....

....100% for this story because in its own right it's well-written and very erotic, but I thought it a bit too similar to your DJ story.

barbie_jo_69barbie_jo_69about 16 years ago
So Sexy

Very sexy, and well written. I would luv to be Robin. Keep up the good work

ratty9ratty9about 15 years ago
robin's fate

great story, there must be a further escapade for robin, he is too good to waste on just one story, i would love to hear that he is dressed and gets taken as a girl.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Willing

Pantyhosed ,dress,wig, slut.Went to an adult store, out the back got into a room, dark, on my hands and knees and waited.Heard footsteps ,shuffled feet,hand on my hosed bottom,balls stroked,pantyhose moved down, finger on my greased hole,in my hole,moving around, out, replaced by cock, pushing, in, yes do it to me, hips grabbed ,fucking, oh yes, then warmth as my insides get flooded, out, zip, footsteps, gone.I re adjust the pantyhose, voices,in the end room i hear, footsteps, hand on my bottom, tracing the crack,pantyhose again down,cock against my hole,pushing, in, sliding in,oooooh, big cock still sliding in, spreading my hole, my insides, hit bottom, my cock coming to life,slowly fucking me, all the way out, back in, slowly,filling me, with cock, making love to my hole, spreading me,oooh so big but i love it, do it,as he slides into me, touching, i cumm, ropey cumm into the front of my pantyhose, he speeds up then i feel it, warmth in my bottom, more warmth, pulsing, shooting warmth, he stays in there then pulls slowly out, i feel cumm dribbling out onto my pantyhose.He leaves, i get dressed and leave,there will be no better fuck today.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
This is true

You may not believe this, but a similar thing happened to me at a bookstore when I was young. The guy was in his 40s but slim and bald. I was watching the videos and he asked me if he could jerk me off. I got scared and walked out to my car. He followed me. and asked me tohis apt. I went!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
i cummed hard great story

please continue with the room mate please i thought i was straight until i read this lol now i cant stop drinking my own cum!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

love the story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Brilliantly written and captivating

To be honest this story is not really my scene, THAT BEING SAID I found it was so well written that I was unable to stop reading it! This story had the ability to draw the reader in and maintain a eroticism without being over the top with detail. This allowed the reader to use their own imagination. ..what can i say, BRILLIANT! As the first story I have read by this author I am really looking forward to reading more of their work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
This is SO FUCKIN HOT!!!

It reminds me of my youth sans lingerie. I was such a happy slut!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I love this!

This is a perfect first time story. I love Adult stores and wish something like this would have happened to me.

Thanks for writing,

Tara McLovin

IwanttwoIwanttwoabout 3 years ago

Enjoyed the story. Would have liked more without the violence. Sex should be voluntary and desirable, but I couldn’t stop reading. Can’t wait to hear more about his college education.

MarieChaliceMarieChalicealmost 3 years ago

Loved this story, by the end i would have done just what Robin did.

donaldelliott11donaldelliott11over 2 years ago
Kissing?

I've been reading porn online for a few years. One frequent comment is a bi-curious man who says "I don't love men. I just want to suck a cock. I'm not gay and the thought of kissing another man is disgusting."

And I get it. I was there once. But now I know the truth. It is precisely because I don't want to be kissed that the man who forces his kisses on me is the ultimate Alpha. You don't top me by putting me on my knees, or on my back. I feverishly WANT your cock in me. I'm not dominated when my craving is met.

I'm dominated when YOUR craving is met. Another man's tongue in my mouth is vastly more humiliating - and therefore satisfying - than a dick in my mouth.

In the fiction I write I try to describe the power of an unwanted kiss. How it crushes my masculinity. It isn't easy.

Loved this story!

Anonymous
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