by DAR2792
"TO BE CONTINUED"
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I hate, hate, HATE getting to the end of a story and only then finding out it's not a complete story. So, every time it happens, the story gets a rating of 1.
Typical trashy writing. The kind of thing which makes LE boring and predictable.
Perfect flow in capturing what many nephews experience. So happy Jessica acted as the adult and accepted responsibility.
You could end it right there. It's good enough as it is. Great 2nd story. I'll have to look for your first.
GREAT story. So HOT !!!!!!!!
I am sitting here so turned on right now. THANK YOU !!!
OMG that was hot!! Where's the next chapter? You've gotten such a great start on this story it would be a shame not to continue it. 5 🌟