All Comments on 'A Voyage into Night Ch. 04'

It would be an interesting and erotic sequel to continue this with stories of Isobel's "training" to be a "mistress of the night"

A great story and well worth the 5-STARS I gave it. A well written story with an excellent plot and excellent character development. I agree with the previous comment that a sequel would be great showing Isobel and Katie adjusting to their new lives. It would be great to have it include them attending their 1st decentering. So please give it some thought about a sequel to this wonderful story.

Retired Army NCO

very well done. I enjoyed it immensely!

I wish you would have done an epilogue so we could read about her adjustment to her new vampire life.

I enjoyed this a lot. Definitely one of the best short stories I've read. I know this was written a while ago, but I'd love to see more. There's potential for a good series here. With a bit of formatting and more material, I could see this becoming a proper ebook.

I’ve read this story a few times, and it never gets old…

Thankyou for all of the lovely comments. They mean a lot.