All Comments on 'A Walk in the Park'

Thanks for another story well-done. Had some good jerk off pleasures as I read this one.

Nice job thanks. For writing it “4” stars

There is some sizzle but has so many grammatical errors that it was hard reading. Ask for editorial help next time.

I applaud you for writing. Not to be confused with your writing. You have great ideas and hope you can get help putting your next story submitted with at least a few more hints of correct English. Keep writing and keep us all hard.

One of the cocks should leave her with a baby bump

This cuck should eat a bullet, right after feeding one to the whore and her lovers.

This writer wasnt strong enough to fend off the call to join the gay side. Along with too many readers.