All Comments on 'A Warm Lap'

A cute scene, doll... Nices expression. Definitely one for a longer read later!

The best story here. Everyone else may put away their pens... very evocative and erection making Thank you

Sexy lil doll what a wonderfully saucy first story, as usual pet, you have me hoping for more from you in the future stories and at home when I get you there

Ken

Glad I got a chance to preview it as a CM before it was published...great work!

was a pleasure to read.......kotc lilly

Instant hard-on ty ;)

Very delicious...makes me want more

passion oozes from every pore of you doesn't it?! *smiles*...excellent job on the story! a great read! *ignites*...fire~

so erotic i was hard again , and i had previewed it before she published, keep them cumming , hardjoe

A great story that elicits both visual and emotional reactions........very, very erotic!!! I loved it!!!

I see you've been such a naughty lass, with all sorts of anonymous studs online! Teasing them as you've teased me, into fabulous orgasms. Lucky will be the stud that marries you one day. Your story-writing skills are deliciously English, meaning well-educated, broad vocabulary, and a visual delight to read---and read aloud, I grew soo long and hard!! Thank you!!

Brilliant erotica!!!! This one is getting bookmarked for sure....my God, you are really something else. Encore!