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All Comments on 'A Warrior's Tale: Elvin Encounter'

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mack_the_knifemack_the_knifealmost 19 years ago
Nice - Could use some toning.

I enjoyed this tale, though the use of some more-or-less out of place expressions threw me off a bit. Also, not to file too sharp a point onto it - Elven Enounter? The narrative was well written, and felt like it was exerpted from a longer work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
To Be Continued ...?

Very nice. Certainly deserves to be continued. Why do you leave us hanging?

ZanthurusZanthurusalmost 16 years ago
More! More! More!

PLEASE, MORE!!! That was one of the best stories I have read!

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