All Comments on 'A Wedding to Remember'

Fantastic first effort hun. A few grammatical errors and typos, but very nice... I now want to know what they get up to in the car, or when they get home! :p

i'm so proud of you. you found the faith in yourself and did it. great story, very erotic. i look forward to reading more of your work.

This is a well written, vivid exciting story! the charachters and setting are great, and the vivid sex is very exciting!

Great job!

This is a well written, vivid exciting story! the charachters and setting are great, and the vivid sex is very exciting!

Great job!

LOVED IT!!!

And like DB...I want to know what kind of fun you two got into next!

This was a very exciting story! I'm still panting. :) I look forward to reading more from you!

This is an extremely good start for anyone! You have done yourself proud! Keep up the good work!

A lot of mistakes. Both spelling, and grammatical.