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All Comments on 'A Week with Arianna: Monday'

by Rockwellray0

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LustyScribeLustyScribeover 3 years ago
Wow! That was good!

I can't remember the last Lit story I finished reading and immediately thought, "I have GOT to see what comes next!" (But it won't be Ari! Lol) Very well done, even with the watersports, which normally are enough to make me immediately stop reading. I just hope it doesn't get too heavy in that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Got that mood balance spot on

Just great Ds dynamics. Yes, strong humiliation and degradation but still playful and enjoyable. Thank You and All the best

aster87aster87over 3 years ago

Fantastic start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Keep it up...

Wow... Absolutely loved it.. touched into one of my own fantasies...

Do continue...

wellrestedwellrestedover 3 years ago
Amazing

This was great - I love how his plans for her are progressing slowly but surely despite her reluctance. Looking forward to part 2!

Jack506Jack5066 months ago

Mostly good, but very short on the aftercare. This reads as more torture, and less dominance.

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