All Comments on 'A Week with Cathy Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Awesome!

Nice and exciting story! Hope Gail starts getting hornier and decides to go for her brother too.

JagnagJagnagalmost 7 years ago
No sex no incest

Dry humping or a hand job from your cousin isnt really incest is it !!

Its called juvenile groping and messing around

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Please continue

Hope you continue the story. And have sister, brother, and cousin having a very naughty night or two.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Seriously?

Well written, but it'd be nice if you didn't cum so damn quickly every time.

Gary_Alexander_2Gary_Alexander_2almost 7 years ago
Follow-ups have already been submitted.

And don't worry, there will be happy endings!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Very nice

Very good story. Loved the teasing, hopefully the next chapter gets even hotter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Glorious!

you've mastered the sexiness of restrained and repressed sexuality, and I like that it's very low on sin-guilt.

The slow build up is great, but I can't wait till he's plowing his sister as she screams his name

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Really Amazing And Believable Story

Loved this story. I hope you don't include Vicki in the sexcapades much. It might end up sounding rather unrealistic. It was already odd that Vicki was okay with Cathy "playing" with her cousin.

Keep up the good work. Great stories like this are hard to find nowadays

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Great build-up

I think Gail wants to get fucked more then the other two. Twins will lose their cherries to each other.

jtw0978jtw0978almost 7 years ago

Good story so far. Looking forward to reading part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
beautiful narration

This story really made me so horny

db85016db85016over 6 years ago
Absolutely

Absolutely the best thing I've read in a while! Damn am I glad I decided to start from the beginning, even though chapter 6 just came out. Onwards....to chapter 2!

F3aR1985F3aR1985over 6 years ago
Oh Gail!!!

Great story so far gotta continue the rest, but poor Gail, sensing a bit jealous, but I'm excited for this hope it gets better in the next chapters, got me a bit lit up

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Great story so far, but...

I love the slow build and realistic feel. One of my problems when reading stories is keeping names and characters straight. Please proof read to avoid issues like this:

" Which wasn't significant for me, and Gail was wearing a bra, but Gail was bra-less and wearing a thin t-shirt that was plastered to her body." So confused for a bit. Thanks for an otherwise great story.

jlarue1959jlarue1959over 5 years ago
Loved it ...

Loved the slow build up and teasing ... got me all excited ...👍😛

OldUncleAlOldUncleAlabout 2 years ago

guess it’s just me and in a mood. But the boy sounds like he’s 12 or 13. Both him and his sister sound very sexually repressed by over bearing parents.

pk2curiouspk2curious10 months ago

I like it . Definitely a tease .

Capricon713Capricon713about 2 months ago

Good story, we need more

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