by MartaMaine
I loved this - well developed and all aspects explored. And being a Brit I could really relate to it.
I enjoyed this so much. Being a Brit, it spoke to me and I could relate to the language. Loved the variety as well...keep it up!
Did carol know Amy was cheating on him while it was happening? If so, he could not be friends with her going forward. Also how could carols husband trust her if she covered up for the cheating?
She went out and had sex six times while "drunk." Come on. Unforgivable. She failed her marriage test. She even lied about how many guys it was. Was a decent story till the girlfriend came back.
Good story, well written, characters that work for me, and all from a first story too. Far better than my first attempt, in my view. Well done!
Such a good story and well written, ticked all my boxes, thank you for writing it look forward to more
Jolly good show!!!!
Loved the story, a bit far fetched I suppose, but every guys dream in one chapter
Would enjoy reading a follow up of how they continued their 4-some under one roof
Can't understand why anybody, Nina included, would ever trust Amy. I guess I can see why Matt might do her arse, but let her back into his life? I don't get it. Also, why are they even touching her without a certified and notarized clean STD test?
Otherwise, the story works for me.