All Comments on 'A Wet Girl'

A lovely, sweaty, sexy fantasy.

This story is exceptionally well written. The pace is not rushed, allowing us to appreciate as Mr. Gregory did this sweet, nubile, delicate, desirable woman who stepped onto his porch and into his life. The details, like gorgeous Ashley herself, reward those who take the time to savor them. A believable plot, if your imagination has room.

Mechanics (wording, sentence structure, grammar) are executed well. No errors present that I noticed to detract or distract. The narrative itself reads smoothly with the variations in sentence construction and wording that maintain interest.

Others may urge you to write another chapter about Ashley and Mr. G. I’d be fine, however, to leave Ashley stepping into this caring man’s life a second time. Then we can imagine what might transpire next.

Please, though, indulge us here at Lit with some more of your outstanding writing if your time and inclinations allow. Thank you for the rainy day magic brought on by two kind, needy people and a forgotten house key.

Not only is this beatifully written, it's also a beautiful story in itself and the eroticism is both enchanting and inspiring......Also some essential truths here;....old people remember youthful freshness and innocence and young people are often in awe of experience and age.

More Please!

What a great story. Thanks for sharing it. Frankie

I am old enough to appreciate just exactly what a delicious little story that is – and to feel more than a little guilty about it! Beautifully written, sir. Bravo!

Obviously written by someone with a good memory for the glories of yesteryear and a knack for fantasy. I'm in my ninth decade and although I don't remember this kind of activity so vividly I can think about the fantasy. Thanks for the energy jolt. 5*

Wonderful story!

This was so well written, both from an editorial as well as a pleasurable standpoint. Perhaps I enjoyed it so much because I find myself aging all too rapidly and hope beyond hope that one day MY doorbell might ring on a blustery, rainy day.

Thanks for confirming for me that blood does still flow to an under-used pleasure center.

Congratulations for weaving a truly loving and erotic tale. I look forward to reading more of your stories!

great reading.

What a wonderful story! Thank you!

Thank you so much for a wonderful, sensual, perfectly paced and genuinely erotic story.

Jesus Christ, you can write!!! You are magnificent! Wow!

what a perve, I'm jealous

You are a wonderful writer, even though the story was a little melancholic.

The title says it all.

One of the best I have read in a long time. Thanks for sharing.

Amazing story. I was wet too by the end :)

Worthy of a 5. You have captured age, appreciation, angst and caring with this tale. Excellent.

Such an amazingly crafted story. So compelling. Looking forward to reading more of your work. 5*

As an older guy, this telling was particularly nice. Good details, well-written and well-paced.

Excellent pacing of this story. As an older man, I can also appreciate your crafting of this short story. Well Done!

Please keep writing your Mature stories!

The question is " what did you think of this story "? My answer Arrant Nonsense. A young girl knocks on my door and because I reluctantly show her a little kindness and sympathy, she unquestioningly follows me to my bedroom, and there bestows all her favours on this poor knackered body, that now knows more pain, than pleasure?

OH I WISH, Every elderly retired widowers dream. Cum to me my darling and cheer this poor weary soul one last time. Please don't ever stop writing such " arrant nonsense ". I love it.

I have just read a lot of the comments on this story not one negative one. Well done.

Dear Author, you produced a very well written and sweet love story. Thank you, jntique/john

I have just noticed the last time I read this story was 2 months ago. As you can see I am here again.

What a lovely story I thoroughly enjoyed it the 2nd time around. I am thinking now it could be a lovely

Long break in the summer for them both, it would be lovely to read about six weeks of a love in,

Particularly if sweet girls mother goes of to visit relatives some of that time. Oh joy .

This is so well written! And extremely hot!

It is a great story. Well written with good progression and finish.

Well done. I’m having just a tiny bit of doubt as to whether she would ever consider him in a sexual manner. There really wasn’t much to explain why she so quickly went to his bedroom. But, it’s all fantasy so anything goes.

I had a hard time getting into this story. Once I did it was well worth the effort. Well written and surprisingly touching and understanding of both. Charming. I guess I'll have to read more of yours.

YUMmmmm Exciting story !!

Wonderful story. Enjoyed reading it. Additional chapters would be welcomed.

That story was both unbelievably lovely and yet, pure fire. In terms of reading every word and not skimming, that was the best story I've read here. I am a follower now, and I'm glad to have found you.

I love/live this tale/tail now.

I reset my parameters on AM down to 18 and I've been having unbelievable sex with a 19 year old beauty.

No Way I'd have believed it possible, even here or in Penthouse Forum, but one taste of her lips (either pair)

and I'm a definite believer.

You've soooo captured the taste of her, it's like you were there!

Thank yoU; Great nasty wet hard hot tale!!

OUTSTANDING !!!

he's probably my age ... and I also have the good fortune that women are drawn to me ... being very close, hugging and not hurrying away, sharing secrets ... although I'm waiting for the one that wants the experience in the mirror ... this story is very well-written, good story development, very erotic, full of hope, enjoyment and uninhibited pleasure ... thank you ... a "5" from me