All Comments on 'A Whole Lotta Penis Goin' On Ch. 01'

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swingerjoeswingerjoealmost 10 years ago
And...?

It's such an odd way to end the story. Even if it's a first chapter, it's an odd place to end -- right in the middle of the action. I wanted to like this story, but it was a little too bizarre. They all just drop their pants and start measuring their dicks? WTF?

"A" for effort, but two stars for the story.

AfterDuskAfterDuskover 5 years ago

I can appreciate a cliff hanger...now I have to read the next one!

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