All Comments on 'A Wider Sky Ch. 11'

I absolutely love this! When will she tell him she's human? Anyway keep up the fantastic work!

I think they are a 7/10 in love as they are definitely falling for each other a lot but there are all these mysteries that are stopping them both from fully falling.

I honestly couldn't say who loves who more because they love each other differently, I don't think it's one sided.

If I knew them together I wouldn't go for either because of their relationship but if I knew them separately I'd be intrigued by both but probably go for Gaelen!

I'm so happy that the heroine is a virgin *dances* .. It's so rare to find virgin heroines in literotica or erotic fiction and I'm always baffled why! It's so much more beautiful when the heroine experiences sexual intimacy with the hero and only the hero. Thankyou thankyou thankyou. I've never been fond of Young Adult romance, but this definitely has potential to become popular!

So I definitely love love love the story but in this chapter where G disappeared was confusing. It was random and the time frame was unclear it really pulled me out of the story. I am really enjoying the development of their relationship though and am eagerly looking forward to how you solve this Romeo and Juliet dynamic!