by SanityCheck
It was quite long with not a lot of erotica.
The Gaelic names were horrible.
She could never have been a peasant if her father was a wool merchant, so that screws up the gardening aspect
Sea going clans are mainly on the West coast and I think there are very few if any locations where you can see the sea and a loch
Clans did not typically honor their dead with funeral pyres that was more of a Viking thing.
Nothing I have said is a particularly huge deal.
Good Luck
Wonderful! Beautifully written and crafted, I look forward to reading more of your stories
I like to imagine Fianna stripping Keane's clothing ever so sensuously from his muscular body, revealing his powerfully masculine physique -- his hairy chest, amazing abs, rugged arms, legs, and thighs, cock -- and then pleasuring him orally, then letting him inside her to deposit his sexy man cream! She could plant wet kisses all over his manly body! Please consider writing more, complete with details! These two lovers fit so well together!
Love historical fiction, and this is one of the best such tales on the site. So well done. Bravos. Possibly more perhaps coming on this couple?
A well done and very sweet tale, much more romance than eroticism, but that’s a good thing here. An easy 5 stars.
Excellent!! Finally Fianna came to her senses with Keane!! Story should have ended after a couple of children