All Comments on 'A Wife Taken Away'

Powerful story that evokes images and dark thoughts.

This was artfully done gore. It was dark and went places I didn't expect it to but the story was unveiled in a sophisticated way albeit it being short.

Harsh.

As others said, dark, harsh even, but powerful. Short but got the message across. Was this written by Jon after finding out about his wife and the contractor?

I would love to read a slow progression of this, from the early seduction to the coercion, down the slow slide of degradation to chattel. By the end though, was the padlock on the headboard needed?

This was very well written with a very dark story line, well done.

Dark, love it.. Update more..

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No need to worry SWAMP DONKEY you will be replaced soon enough

Brutal, loved every word, every nuance... not every love story is roses and soft caresses. The evolution is stark and to the point. I would look forward to a reading of the nurturing and acceptance of this dark, masochistic relationship between a man and woman. Nasty and erotic in the extreme.

Mr. B.

Powerful and very brutal.