All Comments on 'A Wife's Submissive Journey'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
awesome

Great story and well written. Thanks for sharing.

boaman007boaman007over 11 years ago
Awesome

What a great story! Can't wait for more adventures for Susan. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
great story

Hope your next story continues with her telling Nicole about hubby's reaction to shaving.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
wow!

What a brilliant story, I think with that much unprotected sex you could end the next chapter with Sue being pregnant ;) I know she'll want Kenny's child for her Mistress

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

What a totally hot story! Do you have any experience dominating? Either way, loved your story.

mercianknightmercianknightabout 11 years ago
Superb

Your writings never fail to thrill me.

mstrandprincessmstrandprincessalmost 8 years ago

Love your stories, you keep it interesting from start to finish!! Can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Good story until you added the guy, ruined it as the women on women scene definitely made sense without a guy. Not good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Rock hard

Fantastic story. I love this. Please write another! Sue needs to move further into depravity. Take her out doors and cumming on a strangers cock.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
SUSAN THE SLAVE

Wow wow what a hot story gees made me hard. Cant wait for this to be continued

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamabout 4 years ago
I need to be susan so bad

The only thing that will make this better is have Susan go home to hubby and have hubby hot and horney and end up eating her wet pussy until she cums for him.

randynsandyrandynsandyalmost 3 years ago

wonderful. What will Sue's husband think?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good storyline, one of the sexiest things I enjoy in stories is the Dominante one shaving the victim against their will,its often skirted around, some writers even telling the Sub to shave themselves,

Tattooing as a show of ownership is good So to all writers, more emphathise on these aspects please!

Amiable69Amiable69about 1 year ago

What a wonderful story! And so well written. Amy x

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