All Comments on 'A Witch's Valentine's Love Portion'

Since this story lacked chainsaws and other random gore, I doubt this story belongs in the "Erotic Horror" category. You did an excellent job with character development, and the ending was very sweet, so this is not a complaint.

Please keep writing!

I thought it was going to go a completely different way then it did. Kudos. Plus, I love alternative happy endings!

And did you mean to repeat yourself in your opening line?

You are quite the storyteller.I never know what to expect.You keep mewanting to read more. I loved it!

never thought the ending was going to happen that way.

cleaver

You do have a remarkably imagination and a remarkable talent to create such unique and creative stories. That is why I keep reading your work.

Like the Twilight Zone with a happy ending. A really clever story.

I so did not see that coming! It was a good story ...

Overarchingly a fun story. What I'll say is that is if his gf is trans, she ultimately would love to be in something like a straight relationship. The jokes about him being gay are ironic and funny in the sense that its unexpected, but on a more serious level--being with someone trans doesn't make you gay. Otherwise engaging!