by MisterWildCard
You already know my feelings towards the subject in general and the story in particular, but it bears repeating:
ADULT SUPER SENTAI: GO!!
Well written, with snappy dialogue, evocative descriptions and a brisk pace. I'd love to see more from this (or other) Striker team. I mean, what with the next incursion tease and all...
I rarely comment on stories, but you had me from page 1, the concept, and flashbacks, gave a great foundation for the concept of a wonderful story line.
Please develop this story, ongoing.QU
What a great story! I agree that you've built a world and characters that I'd love to read about again.
Just so folks know, this story is an expansion on some ideas I first put out there in my other story "The Tournament of Colors", which shows Strike Force WolfPack during their early training period, and details how Harrison and Melissa first started their relationship. I'm seriously contemplating writing other stories in this universe as well.
PLEASE tie all of the stories you write in this universe together in the title somehow, I can't get enough, but I don't know stories are which at a glance!
Talk about having your cake and eating it too. Loved the story and the ending was just awesome with Melissa on the road to recovery and her sharing her love with Harrison with Naginata. Wish there was another chapter to go with this one.