All Comments on 'A Wolves' Bitch'

Hope we get to read more of this story.

If you do write more, try "Non-Human" as a category. You might get more response. Sci-Fi/Fantasy is more about other world-building on the whole. If it's just modern urban-Earth fantasy Twilight-werewolve-vampire stuff, Non-Human is the place it's better welcomed.

Pretty abusive stuff here, though so...it turned me off. Establishing a world where this is how a "prize female" can expect to be treated, it makes me shudder in disgust. If it's just a copy-urban fantasy, well, okay, then blame Twilight, move on.

I can't wait for chapter 2. Please hurry. :)

You might want to point out this measurement is from Australia or New Zealand. In most other places, this would be impossible, if not freakish.

Actually, that would only be a 36DD in the USA. I know some women who have larger breasts than that (myself included, at a 40 DDD/F, depending). I do understand what you mean, though.

I need more ...

Liked what you've started, but if she is on her hands and knees, his balls can't be hitting her ass.

All that trouble to get her bred by a wolf and you left out the best part.

Good story line. But too quick through the scene. Barely any foreplay and not enough detail. And no knot ? I agree with other posters there. Didn't do much for me. But not bad.

This is hot and wonderful. Please write another chapter! I've re-read this one ans chapter two enough.