All Comments on 'A Woman and Her Sister Share a Love'

Not only is this too short, it’s rife with grammatical errors. I had to go back through some passages to make sure what I read made sense. Please look into getting a proofreader/editor for future stories.

Way to short, barely starts before it's over. Lots of misspellings. On several occasions the other started talking about 1 thing, but by the end they claimed talking about another. Example: starts out describing two "weigh tresses", but by the end their saying it's the description of the sisters. Also, only 1 is futa, I was expecting both to be.

I liked the concept of the story but in places found it difficult to read. Spell and grammar checker should help or maybe an editor. Don't give up keep going

Futanari are a really interesting sub-sub-genre of erotica to me (and others), but you never see it outside of manga. This sounds like a good beginning, and I hope you keep up the story as well as the level of detail.

I love this, you are a little creul for cutting it there but i like the story. The sister and her younger futa sis. I love futanari so i like this since it has two things i like. Incest and girls with dicks.

You ass holl how can you end it rite when it's getting good. ;(

The beginning was rather confusing for me.. To many flips of "I" Otherwise im glad to see more authors writing about futas. :) Keeep on it! :D

I think you could use a little more practice with your writing, but the story itself is incredibly hot and sexy.

Looking forward to the next chapter

This is a good story, but i wish you had drawn it out a little more. That being said, I can't wait to read more.

Spelling, Grammar, and basic structure issues aside...

its fucking win! I have always loved Futanari storys/manga... something so fucking hot about it!

A few times I have asked those who said Futanari was nasty, why they hated it when they where ok with watching a FULL BLOWN MALE fuck a female, but when it was 2 females, one who was born bi-gender, fuck or have sex, why only then was it nasty... if you cant guess, he didnt reply and actually /quit IRC...

I thought the term was "intergender"

Nice story, I like your dialog, didn't find it hokie or trite.