All Comments on 'A World for the Taking Ch. 04'

Good to see you're writing again, i'm really enjoying this story and looking forward to more. Ignore the haters and trolls that spout rubbish about your stories hun they are just a waste of oxygen, your stories are well written and detailed and if they don't like them they can bugger off.

This is a nicely crafted story and I think it would be of interest to a broader readership. I hope RipperFish will consider publishing. Perhaps Kinder and too a teen market.

It was nice of the author to update the readers on the issue of Story World not being completed. I'm still thinking it's a long way off, if ever, but there's always hope. This story is starting to come together.