All Comments on 'A Young Neighbour's Education Ch. 01'

I'll give it five. (unless you'd rather give me one). A winner!

Excellent start, I hope, to a series of stories involving these ladies relating their experiences. A most enjoyable read, well written. Adopt a common thread or title so that they can be easily recognized.

This is pure fun! Also, "no one was hurt in the experiences, other than the occasional heart ache."

A little raunchier might be nice, but then I haven't read every one.

Join the general world population in terms for various items, it would make the meaning far clearer. Like for nearly the full world its "panties" not "knickers" reading such isn't smooth for most.

Joulie does it again...Thanks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome story so very erotic brings back memories.

of days gone by and the many fucks love the story and the awesome writing

Well done,(well that day at leased). Looking forwards to the rest.Thanks for warning from the " lazy" one, and wishing you a very happy new year.

I can personally bear witness to the sort of profound naivete you've portrayed in the lad. (But not the profound dimensions.) The interplay of that naivete and the mature woman as gently but firmly controlling, manipulative (and so lascivious) initiator gives the narrative a keenly erotic edge. What I find also remarkable about it is the thread of bawdy humor woven into the behavior and your superbly rendered dialogue; it actually heightens the pleasure of reading this first installment. You are so darned good at this! Can't wait for what's coming. Kal

Lovely story, makes me wish I was Jack. Personally I love the word knickers, maybe it's a cultural thing.

Hot, smoothly wrote, and presents a scenario that allows everything to just flow a'naturel. Well intentioned. You manage to crossover the spanned era english usages. The Coven should realise that while set from a female perspective then these memory disclosures' male impact could be measured; possibly in local heatwaves, mile of iron flesh, and I suspect enough milk to get a warm sticky shallow bath. If that thought is too much think donations to run the city fertility bank. I hope the warmth intended comes across. Share our Best wishes and grat's with All the Angel witches. Ps Maybe u should found a Website?! A secretary appointment could do a story a week. Then of course we will have to decide what to do about the :-) satanic fan base, and have a membership scheme for the women with similar witchy sex deeds to relay! It always strikes me that the shenanigans of American Servicemen in a man starved uk in WW2 has never been properly disclosed, while other war events have monuments. As for hundreds of strange bodies crammed in shelters and U' stations. Scared soft may be the more likely scenario among the outnumbered males, but then the All Clear... Also Did some women offer their suffering 'sisters' more than a shoulder to cry on? A few older Grandma's may have twinkle eyed recalls? The pregnancy fear factor. . But aged over 50, an early memory of Lanes and nearby shrubbery, is discarded Condoms!! Two's tango.

Well done, Joulie! Don't change a thing about your style, please! Your use of the Queen's english is refreshing. The euphenisms you employe are the foundation of what makes your stories so good. You give the innocent male reader a glimps into the hearts and minds of real women with a dash of humor on the side. If more ladies would follow your lead and relate their (or their friends) experiences (in their own regional dialects) it would certainly be instructive, entertaining, and, well, inspirational...if you catch my drift. Chapters two and three await...luv, Fred

I loved the no nonsense language of this story. It gave it an earthy reality. I could imagine them lying down in the front room in the half light behind the net curtains. Looking forward to reading through the rest. Thank you ladies.

Loved the insight into the female mind of the 50s. If I'd only known, I might have got laid more than I did. I enjoyed the sense of fun conveyed by the story. A lovely story where everyone gets their pleasure without hurting others.

Quite a different style of writing but it compliments the tale and helps paint the picture of the time-period. Being picky, I would have liked more description of the feelings both characters were experiencing, but the dialogue and storyline were original, fun and enjoyable. Great set-up for Chapter 2 too!

A lovely warm and loving story.

It is good his mother saw the problem and found a solution with her neighbor.

Understand the old neighbor had with so many couplings in one session. Remember it myself in my young days.

Going to read Ch. 2 now.

Keep writing Joulie.

REgards

so very enjoyable. so realistic are the descriptions. I like the wording, it seems to be from a time long ago and words used must be descriptive for that time.

Thanks for sharing.