by HeyAll
You’re writing is so good it’s time you went into mainstream writing (with Lee Child’s retired there’s a vacancy). But please don’t give up writing here.
Nice story, this does feel like one you could continue for a couple more chapters
Excellent story, well done. But ya know, mother, and son have a lot to discuss, and issues to resolve. So another chapter is almost mandatory. (If you please).
Not a bad set up for the next chapter. This one's a bit stiff, but maybe Davie Boy will give just that to Jen.
I think it's understandable that HeyAll wanted the story to end with a climax, both literally and figuratively. So the last act logically was the intercourse between mom and son. However, I think a stronger evidence for the device's functionality is mom's orgasm in front of everybody without physical stimulation. Just a thought, otherwise a 5 star story in my book.
One way to get a project finished and prove it works. Well at least the son had some fun
Great story you always do it well Thanks
I haven’t been a fan of mother/son stories. . . Until I read this story!
An intriguing premise. The academic angle is almost plausible. . . makes me wonder what the atmosphere was really like back in the early days of the Kinsey Institute and Masters and Johnson's research programs. I know there must be other studies going on. . . but would they really have any possibility of working like this? No matter. A helluva fantasy.
What we do in the name of scientific progress.
Very well thought out and written story. It would seem to beg for a serial extension. Mainly to explain how this affects their relationship, just a thought. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.
It seems you have opened some doors for several equals based on mom and son’s newfound closeness.
It was a hot story it’s just I’m not that into incest. Being from Arkansas we get accused of that all the time and it’s just not true. While
I will admit I’ve wanted to fuck a few of my friends moms, and my own mother was pretty hot, that’s just a line I don’t think I could cross.
A corporate room orgy would have been great. Showing and proving to all it really worked. Awesome story...
Nice. In the sequel we learn of the cumulative affects of the device. Even when mot linked to it, changes in personality & behavior are evident