All Comments on 'Aaah! I Am Nude In Public 3 & 4'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bad grammer but amazing content.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Bad grammer. but great content.

mostly_harmlessmostly_harmlessabout 16 years ago
Grammar is not *that* bad

Prepositions (which are the hardest part of English, IMHO) and inconsistent tense, but it's perfectly readable.

Content is very good, too.

knotz2uknotz2uabout 13 years ago
Second verse, smae as the 1st

As promised, I am voting in each part...Pat - knotz2u@yahoo.com

schonschonover 12 years ago

very nice story well done

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