All Comments on 'Abandoned Treasure Ch. 20-29'

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BuzzCzarBuzzCzar7 months ago

I sure didn't see that twist coming. Nicely done. 5*

CreepyDragonCreepyDragon7 months ago

Man, your stories never disappoint

skippersdadskippersdad7 months ago

That was great, you always pull it together. thank you.

MrSmith27MrSmith277 months ago

Another great chapter. I'm enjoying the description of the other were species.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Ok, after the first installment, things are coming together, I don’t feel like crying, or jumping from a bridge now whew, No tissues were used for this reading. I have no idea we’re this story is going, but I’m in for the ride, take me away Partwolf. Thank you for all your time and effort to intertwined all of your fans. KS

PS thanks anon for talking me off of the ledge😀

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Phew. Better.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Abandoned treasure now becomes... abandoned story...

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I hope you are ok and doing good . It’s not like you to pause this long mid story . We all hope to hear from you soon 🙏🏽

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

The story is up to chapter 44 at inkitt.

partwolfpartwolf4 months agoAuthor

I'm up to chapter 55 on Inkitt, and I think I'm done here. I uploaded chapters 30-39 in mid-December, but they keep hitting as AI-generated and haven't posted. They aren't; I use Grammarly as a grammar editor, but their checks keep flagging it. Since I don't know how to edit out of a computer program saying it is AI, I'm done here.

wil2085wil20854 months ago

you're not the only one having that issue. their system hit another author because of a character's description. the ai dector is falsely flagging it. just work on the story until it's complete and then try posting it. odds are it will be fixed by then. just remember what happened last time when you were writing The Last Shewolf,

wil2085wil20854 months ago

here's your solution. run your story through an ai detector. it should flag the problem. just make changes and repeat until it passes.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I saw a comment from another author (sorry, don't remeber who) a couple days ago in which he described ways he had gotten past tye AI filter. Bqsically he introduced several small errors to keep the story from being 'too perfect'.

I have no knowledge of any such software but it stands to reason that there are sensitivity settings. If so, whoever set it up expects errors. Nice bit of low expectations, I mean, obviously a bunch of amateurs won't be able to write competent mistake free stories, right? Smh

SensitiveHandsSensitiveHands3 months ago

Patrols, I found you on inkit, but only one story comes up. When I try to go to your profile, all I get are grey boxes with no text. Really want to keep reading your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Thank you for your creativity and sharing the stories. Sorry to hear about your issues here. I was just getting into this, so I went to the other site to see the rest. What a pain in the a##. Only one chapter at a time and scrolling forever to find that out, then they want you to subscribe after two chapters. Forget it. I just pop in here every now and again to get lost in a short story, I don’t want another account with my information spread far and wide yet again.

viper2974viper297430 days ago

I love the Treasure stories and can't wait for the next chapter

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