All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 01 - Introduction'

With exception of bit odd howl of lone wolf at end, easily caught up in Abby — her mixed feelings, preoccupation, mild frustration, even boredom. You’ve created a believable/knowable character; nicely done. You may have felt it necessary to warn your readers before starting, but the bit of tension created by fiancé’s reaction to Abby spending time with Mandy enough promise. Looking forward.

Good start - looking forward to seeing where you take us next

Thank you for the kind feedback. The wolf imagery is used again in various chapters of Act I, hopefully, it makes sense as it goes along :-)

Was it Friday? I thought it was Thursday. Scrolled back up, yep Thursday... details...

good start - Jimvette