All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 25'

I love the slow pace, the details, the doubts, the humanness of the characters. Nobody is perfect but she is bringing out the best in them by being herself. I look forward to learning more about James as the character who most needs fleshing out in my mind.

Another 5, as noted, getting to be routine, looks like Abby is going to be the trader of the area, as well as the Squires lady. Some interesting areas for development arise. I still think that Kezza67 is a little more of a professional writer than we know for sure. This should certainly be in book form, at least an Ebook. It is the first story on Lit that I would be prepared to buy in book form.

I would love to go visit that station! Unfortunately I no longer have the capacity to appreciate the food at the Inn.

well done.

Hmm, I suspect Brasher will end up living in the station masters house, while Abby becomes the new “Lady at the big house”. My 1000/1 shot is Brasher & Gwen hooking up……

My money is on Brasher to be the long lost father of Abby.