All Comments on 'Abby Comes for a Visit'

by carrteun

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ag2507ag2507almost 7 years ago
Gosh, Norwalk

A story featuring Norwalk CT. You'll be running up to the Westport Playhouse next to meet Joanne Woodward,lol

barbianbarbianalmost 7 years ago
LaGuardia Airport

Lagardia is not a two hour ride from Stamford or the Whitestone bridge but aside from that the story was very good

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Lucky guy

Very lucky guy hope you understand how lucky of a man you are. Hope to hear how the boat trip works out. One guy that going to be a great week coming up. Be safe. Hope you will be in good care

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Detroit

Good story! BTW Michigan is in the Eastern Time zone so there would not be any difference in time between New York and Detroit.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
so when is the next chapter?

I hope there is more. Are we going to the cape?

kalzoo1kalzoo1over 6 years ago
Very Good

Looking forward to the next chapter with Erin!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
It's time for chapter 2!

Great story, but it is calling for more,

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
And what happened on the boat ?

Probably the best description of a woman and her toys.

73

HP

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Anon

Never like these stories where wife brings old flame into relationship.

Deceptive and destructive.

Privates1stClassPrivates1stClassover 4 years ago
Gotta love a hall pass...

and all the pussy you desire. Now we want to know what happened on the boat. Poor guy will need a second vacation after servicing two hot women day and night. :)

Great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Continue the story.

They are very interesting people.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15over 3 years ago

Frankly I think he should have told both of the ladies no way in he'll! Now Erin can have a Hall Pass to cheat on him.

lc69hunterlc69hunteralmost 2 years ago

Haven't you ever shared a lover?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story!! I'm looking forward to the next installments. The sailing journals, the questions & answers ...... So much more of this story needs to be told!! Well Done !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I laughed when his boss Terry said he sounded more relaxed. Fucking/getting fucked eleventeen times in 24 hours has a tendency to do that...

Jalibar62Jalibar624 months ago

I’ve read too many LW stories, lol. When Erin gave him the hall pass, I was sure she was off fuckng someone else while she was away on her trip.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Really enjoyed this story, but I feel like you left your participles dangling here ...if you know what I mean. Seeing that it's been well over six years since you published the original story, I'm guessing you're not going to revisit this one, which is a big let down.

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9/19/2023 It has been over a year since I last posted something. I have a story almost ready for Halloween, the first time I've tried to construct a story for that holiday. Just a section of rewrite and a final editing check before it's done. It will be ready in time for the H...