All Comments on 'Abby's Ascension Ch. 02'

interesting concept. Can't wait to see where it goes.

I really enjoyed your story,

and as previously commented: Interesting concept, that holds a ton of promise!

On top: Well written, and easy to read with only a few small spell-check-mischanges (I guess).

So to sum it up: Keep them coming, currently the stories land you (in my opinion) in the top 10% of the Lit-stories...