All Comments on 'Abby's Ascension Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Hmmm.

Hot, but also seems like gratuitous man-bashing. I hope Abby gets what she richly deserves.

effjooeffjooover 9 years agoAuthor
Man bashing

I could have done a better job of filling in what an ass wil was. But worry not, this story isn't about man bashing. It's about power, corruption and sex. Oh, and transformation.

jovian16jovian16over 9 years ago
Love it!

This is a great story, I love it! Everything about it so hot - the vivid description of the sex is great, but Abby's transformation, especially the interplay between her physical shapeshifting and her mental/emotional changes, is just top notch. Her impersonation of Sarah touches on a fetish of mine, and does so very effectively. I hope to read more installments, and see who and what else Abby turns herself into!

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