All Comments on 'Abby's Ghost'

It's brakes that squeal, not breaks.

Your storys just get better and better

Keep it up.

I always Love seeing one of your stories on the submissions page. You're actually what inspired me to finally get an account and post my stories on here.

So many instances in life evolve round being given a second chance at happiness and so often have a heard of ghosts of the past influencing the future.

A magnificent story, if possible 11 out of 10.

P,S The anonymous comment about the typo, people like that should grow up and realise that in the heat of the moment pressing the wrong key or making a spell error is natural. You done well kid, until next time x

Just wanted to say thanks for taking a time out and writing this.

Until I got to the very end, I didn't think of the public service announcement. That last scene (coupled with the 1st scene) really drives home a point about distracted driving. I just love love stories. Yours takes us for the roller coaster ride that the characters are on. Very good writing. Thanks.

You had me worried a bit at the end, LOL!

I wonder if Kari will reconcile with her family now that she has found a new love. Not sure if they deserve it, and frankly hope that Trevor and Trudy DO break up.

And a picture of the two of them for Lindsey's hateful mother would be a nice touch, if a little evil!

Amazing, beautiful story. Wish there was more.

Would have loved to know how things ended with kari and her family

I really wish there was more courting and time getting to know each other. There's no relationship between the two except for the icky resemblance between Lindsay and Kari. Putting Lindsay's ring on Kari? Creepy. You might want to read Colleen Thomas's piece on writing erotica for women.

Thank you for sharing it with us!

Wonderful story - love it a lot.

A good story well told.

It is beautifully written... A good quality romance after a long time!

A really good Story!