by Ada Stuart
Now that one was just cruel. Here you go building up the tension and excitement again to let us down with nothing but a cliff hanger.... just cruel. :)
Good story and I hope there are more to come.
This chapter is all over the place. Firstly, there’s nothing in it that’s very sci-fi. Teri has accepted she is on another planet incredibly well?! Teri suddenly feels something for Connor? The joking aspect has gone on too long.. a few other things too.