by Drmaxc
This seems to be a mind control pedophilia thing. Maybe move it to another category other than non-con.
I loved the story and its still non consent but I think it is slowly moving to taboo but i like that alot too and as for the other comment of course its borderline its under non consent what did you expect to see :)
The category is Nonconsent and you're surprised? If this is not to your taste, you have plenty of other options. Would you complain about girl-on-girl action in the Lesbian category or Werewolves in Non-human?
I'm totally loving this story and can't wait to see how it ends.
There used to be a men's club type comedian whose punchline was "it's the way I tell 'em". Well Max with you it's also the way you tell 'em. But your tales are a lot more wholesome (is that the right word) and definitely more amusing than those of Mr Carson. I find it a bit strange that with quite a few of your tales the comments are from 6 or 7 years ago, I just wonder what the reason for that may be. For me I've always said I like a bit of sex with my humour, you provide both in spades. Thanks Max. As always 5 stars.