All Comments on 'Aberrant Pt. 03'

by DragonCobolt

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DragonCobolt over 6 years agoAuthor

Thanks for reading!

So, you may have noticed two scenes with only two characters in em! Those were private scenes run out of the roll20 session with me and Nate and me and Kitty! I hope that the additional scenes were fun!

Now, for the normal blah blah end of thing!

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AZslyder over 6 years ago

Mixed convos

While I get that real life groups often have multiple conversations happening at once, the way you structure them in your writing just makes this difficult to read. Not enough hook to keep me going with this one - I didn't make it past the house-warming party, I'll keep an eye out for new works though.